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Magazine Front Cover
Name of my magazine title should be bigger


Text alignment


Try crop - to knees - see if works


Centralise - Data


Tagline "The magazine for modern men"


Barcode - cost - small


Erase back wall around ear


Another article headline - see what looks like - is it too cluttered?


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Caption photos


Change page numbers


Align article headlines with outside edge


Punctuate article


"Pumping out awards" -> not in tone with rest of magazine


How Thisath and Robin also reunited again to make documentary


Check spelling


"Millennial" check spelling in article


"Reunited film with their owner" add
narrative constructed "rearrange text Thisath on top"


Check spelling for artistic


"What was it like working with Robin again"


End article with cont.


Comment on Tv documentary vs cinematic documentary



- not as much marketing - trailer not released in cinema


Credit writer at top of article
Big R at beginning - DropCap


put quote at beginning of article in promoting documentary section


Channel 5 usualy has shockumentaries - reunited is different therefore increasing target audience


move bottom tagline to left - nearer number


also potentially add website = intertextuality